#2 Choose a writing that demonstrates your skills at revision and reseeing your work.
The piece that I chose to revise was the timed writing. The assignment was: Using the discussion and your viewing notes, develop a thesis-driven essay of 3-5 paragraphs that demonstrate HOW the film defines what it is to be an outsider (avoiding unnecessary plot summary). In the second part of your essay, discuss how the film challenged or affirmed your own perceptions of what it is to be an insider or outsider. I feel that I could have done a better job on this task. The conclusion is what needs the most work, so that will be my main focus.
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